2007/10/5-Esperanza Rising

  • what happened  ->    One day, when Esperanza was staying at the cabin, she heard the sound of gun and shouting out. She was so afraid to hear that sound. She fastly ran to Miguel to ask what has happened. And he said, it is the resistance of strikers. She was very afraid because of the gun and knife which are very dangerous. Few days later, she gor accustomed with the shouting and screaming soung. But that day, she coul not hear any noise but nothing. She felt weird and asked other people who work with her what has happened. They told Espernaza that the immigration bus has came. Every winter or spring, the immigration bus comes to take strikers out of the village so that the village wil have the peace and if strikers are gone, there will be no other power which is against the government. Esperanza thought about her mom. If she has taken by them, then she won’t have any chance to see her mom. She was afraid to be cought by them. All of the sudden, Marta, who was Esperanza’s bad fried and striker came to Espernaza and asked her with the scared voice to help her out. Esperanza was afraid so thought about a lot. Even though she was afraid, she helped Marta with the asparagus. After the bus left, Esperanza was keep thinking about Marta whether she is alive or not.
  • what will happen next?  ->I think Esperanza’s mom will die. Therefore, Esperanza will be in the situation with the hardness. She will become more sad so that she will have melancholy which is not good.
  • how did you feel about the parts you have just read? ->Even though you are in dangerous situation and Marta was such a bad friend, Esperanza helped her out. It was amazing that Esperanza helped her. If I was her, I would not help her but care about myself.
  • if there is anything to change, how would you change it?  -> I would like to make her mom to be cure fastly and make them to escape from the camp village so that they can live freely.
  • might want to ask the writer or the characters in the story?  ->I want to ask Esperanza how did she feel when she was helping Marta when she was in the dangerous situation.
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    October 5, 2007. 1.

    One Comment

    1. meenahuh replied:

      Hi Tiffany~ This is Meena.
      I’ve been to your blog for 3 times, and leaving one comment now…^^;
      Your blog is great!
      It looks smart and neat.
      Your contents are also nice, too.
      But what I want to recommend you is that, use another form of writing your blog. I have seen through your blog, and I found out that you are always using this pattern, such as, what happened, what will happen next, how did you feel, how would you change, and what you might want to ask the writer or the character.
      I used that pattern in my blog too, but then like I was commented by Ms. Bae to use some other patterns.
      It’s just a little suggestion^^~
      I hope you do not feel bad about this.
      Other things are F.A.N.T.A.S.T.I.C!
      The content, and the design of the blog…
      But it was just a little suggestion for you^^

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