2007/9/7-Book-George’s Marvelous Medicine

  • what happened
  •   -> George made the marvelous medicine with so many things in it and he gave it to his Grandmother and she ate it. Soon, she became taller and got weird. Also he gave the medicine to his hen and the same thing happened to the hen. After, his mom and dad came to the house and he told them about what was happened. Gerge’s daddy was very curious about the medicine and told George that make more medicine.

  • what will happen next?
  • ->Geroge’s fathe and George will make more medicine and sell it to everybody with an expensive money.

  • how did you feel about the parts you have just read?
  • ->I really liked it and it was very funny, so I laughed a lot.

  • if there is anything to change, how would you change it?
  • ->I hope there would be more good and exciting verb which make us to be more interesing about the book.

  • any questions you might want to ask the writer or the characters in the story?
  • ->I want to ask George how did he make it.

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    September 7, 2007. Tiffany's Stories.

    One Comment

    1. queenyabba replied:

      Hello there, ‘Happy Tiffy’

      I love the name 🙂

      I liked your description of the story so far.. It helps me to know where you are at. I was quite curious as to know what exactly you were laughing at when reading the book. Obviously it was something funny but it would be nicer if you could include some examples. Same goes for ‘exciting verbs’ you mentioned. They sound like fun!!

      Well done, Tiffany.
      Keep reading and,
      keep up the good work!

      QY

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